How did Meta do on their AI outbound? (1.Viewing)

So I recently asked Meta AI for an outbound email suggestion. After a very long response, I asked for a shorter version. Here is what it said:

“Here is a shorter version of the email:

Subject: Offer to Sell [Domain Name]

Dear [Buyer's Name],

I'm reaching out to offer the domain name [Domain Name] for sale. This premium domain name aligns perfectly with your business niche and can enhance your online presence, improve brand recognition, and increase website visibility.

I'm open to negotiating a fair price and willing to consider reasonable offers. If interested, please let me know, and we can discuss the details.

Thank you,

[Your Name]

[Your Contact Information]

Let me know if you'd like me to make any further adjustments!”

How do you think they did? What would you change?

I have sent a few outbound emails over the last 5 years with some luck so I do have to say that this one is short and sweet and I personally like it.

It's actually pretty good.

Remember that the subject line is key to the email getting opened or ignored.

Ask it to make you a foolproof subject line.